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  19:04:35  14 September 2009
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QuaNTuMbenxh
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Wow, ~MOAR~

PLEASE!!!


im begging you

this shit is the shit man... havent read things like this in ages lovely just get me more okay??
  00:44:06  15 September 2009
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On forum: 11/21/2008
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Wow, ~MOAR~

PLEASE!!!


im begging you

this shit is the shit man... havent read things like this in ages lovely just get me more okay??
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Okay. More is on the way but it needs edits. Then there's the continuing story to write in first draft.

Thanks for reading & feedback.
  00:53:09  15 September 2009
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hhiker
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No feedback for you until you provide further reading
  01:03:04  15 September 2009
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Psynexus
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Very nice... fucking nice indeed. I confess I get so caught up writing I forget to sit back and read sometimes... I'm glad I chose this, you did a superb job.

I especially love the way the beginning was crafted to reflect a more broad view of the world and the Zone before jumping right in, it makes for a great calm before the storm. On that note, when they're driving from Kiev to the borders I like the way you say the Zone is getting bigger and eating everything in its path like a devourer of life. I know exactly what you mean as my first story was called "Life and Death".

It was pretty creative how you had the main character trying to understand Ukrainian as Blondie spoke it to him and all he got were pieces and parts - good stuff, really believable.

Anyway, I was hoping that reading a good story would jump-start my creative engine and it fucking did so I think it's time for me to start writing again. One piece of advice: DO NOT STOP WRITING!

If you get a chance and would like a good read too, feel free to check out both of my stories here in the story section, both "The Zone: Life and Death" and my latest stuff, "The Zone II: Rebirth". I'd love to swap ideas and opinions some time too if you'd like.

Fucking outstanding. 5/5.
  01:52:10  15 September 2009
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hhiker: But without feedback, I don't know whether folks're reading and liking, or what.
Anyway, as 'punishment' for no feedback...in you go. But later.
(And the pic you did based on my other story was cool. )

psynexus: I did read some of 'The Zone: Life and Death'. I was waiting until it was done, though. I noticed your sequel as well. I'll give 'Life and Death' a proper read now.
Ta for the comments on this. I was hoping I hadn't made the language thing too much of a handicap, and that 'Blondie' - as she is for now - didn't come across as speaking too stereotypically. Could've been worse: I could've given her a Bond-style Russian name like Miss Sukmioff or something.
The 'creeping Zone'...just seemed like a good idea, to me. I was really just winging it, though. There's a lot that makes sense in-game that's not really logical in the 'real world', so it's kind of thinking around things to make it make 'proper' sense. i.e. people get in due to lack of resources and political resolve, army does what it can but it's never enough.

Anyway, more soon. I'll check back on yours and see about ideas/opinion swap. Sounds OK to me, though.
  09:16:59  15 September 2009
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Dogpatch
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All i can say is that it's bloody awesome. Bloody, bloody awesome!
  12:33:32  15 September 2009
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Herr_Alien
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Thing is, I don't want to give feedback until the story ends. I don't want my feedback to influence how the story will unwind.

So, keep writting, and at the end I'll give you my feedback.
  13:12:24  15 September 2009
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AndyTbone: All I can say is cheers.

Herr Alien: Fair enough. Nothing like a bit of pressure to perform!
  14:27:28  15 September 2009
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hhiker
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hhiker: But without feedback, I don't know whether folks're reading and liking, or what.
Anyway, as 'punishment' for no feedback...in you go. But later.

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Ooh, scary

OK, if you really NEED to know -
i SO enjoy the "practical" touch in your text - the "how to shit in the woods" kind of angle, how many pairs of underwear to pack, what type of socks to wear, etc.
Maybe it's because i think about those aspects a lot myself, i don't know.
But without it, thhese stories just wouldn't be the same

(Now, the real reasons (seriously) for not saying anything:
1) i did get a very powerful experience from reading and don't want to ruin it with babble
2) i didn't like it and i don't have anything constructive to say to help improving it
3) i've only read the tiniest fraction of the whole fan-fiction section, the most recent one and i fear to be unfair towards all the authors who have posted here before... )

EDIT:
reading the little boy's response above ... it think this needs clarification:
the second part of my post refers to the earlier joking "no feedback unless..."; this is a general musing on the topic "why i don't say anything" - not to do with the story at hand.
  16:35:49  15 September 2009
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QuaNTuMbenxh
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This is such a good peice of a story, think of it as a cake, the more you update the more cakes get baked, we want all the cakes think of that ;- )

Anyway your story is really neat, dont listen to whoever thinks the opposite.

I like the "in detail" stuff.
 
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