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  11:59:25  22 September 2009
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Psynexus
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Nice. Glad to see my name used!


Also, that was pretty awesome. I don't know how you can make a story so action packed, as I associate intense "scenes" as visual interpretations, not verbal interpretations, but you manage it quite well and quite realistically. That was also a pretty good description of a really bad acid trip.
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What can I say, I have a way with words, lol. Yeah, the "experiment" for this piece was to start with as quiet and calm a scene as possible, something where you wouldn't really expect any conflict whatsoever and it should soothe the nerves... then BOOM! Acid trip! I'd like to think I succeeded.

And yes, your character did make an appearance. He'll be showing up again in the next part with Virtue for obvious reasons as well as further down the road when I stop sitting with my thumb up my ass and actually write this damn story, lol.

Once again, thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it.
  20:14:09  22 September 2009
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Nice. Glad to see my name used!


Also, that was pretty awesome. I don't know how you can make a story so action packed, as I associate intense "scenes" as visual interpretations, not verbal interpretations, but you manage it quite well and quite realistically. That was also a pretty good description of a really bad acid trip.

What can I say, I have a way with words, lol. Yeah, the "experiment" for this piece was to start with as quiet and calm a scene as possible, something where you wouldn't really expect any conflict whatsoever and it should soothe the nerves... then BOOM! Acid trip! I'd like to think I succeeded.

And yes, your character did make an appearance. He'll be showing up again in the next part with Virtue for obvious reasons as well as further down the road when I stop sitting with my thumb up my ass and actually write this damn story, lol.

Once again, thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it.
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No worries.

You (whether it was intentional or not) did a pretty good job of describing the way acid trips turn bad, as well. People give you acid, say some creepy shit to you, and you have a bad trip. It works like that.
  06:50:28  24 September 2009
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Sorry for the double post, it wouldn't edit the other one.

But just so you know, psynexus, "Undercover" is missing on your writerscafe page.
  07:51:31  24 September 2009
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Psynexus
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Sorry for the double post, it wouldn't edit the other one.

But just so you know, psynexus, "Undercover" is missing on your writerscafe page.
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Huh... I think I might have accidentally copied 2 chapters into 1. It happens when you're copying and pasting a gratuitous amount of text like I did. Let me see if I can dig it up and repost it - thanks for letting me know.
  09:54:56  24 September 2009
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Sorry for the double post, it wouldn't edit the other one.

But just so you know, psynexus, "Undercover" is missing on your writerscafe page.

Huh... I think I might have accidentally copied 2 chapters into 1. It happens when you're copying and pasting a gratuitous amount of text like I did. Let me see if I can dig it up and repost it - thanks for letting me know.
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Not a problem.
  11:08:19  24 September 2009
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Psynexus
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Sorry for the double post, it wouldn't edit the other one.

But just so you know, psynexus, "Undercover" is missing on your writerscafe page.

Huh... I think I might have accidentally copied 2 chapters into 1. It happens when you're copying and pasting a gratuitous amount of text like I did. Let me see if I can dig it up and repost it - thanks for letting me know.

Not a problem.
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Fixed
  23:48:42  24 September 2009
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Sorry for the double post, it wouldn't edit the other one.

But just so you know, psynexus, "Undercover" is missing on your writerscafe page.

Huh... I think I might have accidentally copied 2 chapters into 1. It happens when you're copying and pasting a gratuitous amount of text like I did. Let me see if I can dig it up and repost it - thanks for letting me know.

Not a problem.

Fixed
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Sweet. Thanks.

Now get to writing.
  01:29:46  25 September 2009
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Please keep writing, See! Comment for you.

Seriously though man, your story rocks and you need to add to the cliffhenger, and show more Reaper and Enigma!!!

I miss her.

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  06:01:33  28 September 2009
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Psynexus
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The Freedom of Duty

Woot! The next part is finally up. Let it be noted that this part actually comes between the first and third chapters. (Report and Burn-up on Re-entry).

Here we see the continued struggle of Freedom, as well as the brunt of what is being called the "Third Chernobyl Incident" as it falls on Duty's shoulders to clean up the mess their former-allies in the military have failed to clean up.

Link: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Psynexus/455710/
  06:31:46  28 September 2009
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Awesome, man. Keep it up.
 
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